by sramir2
I agree it is way to short to even be a chapter. You need to make it longer for it to be a chapter. Also you need to get an editor as there are way to many grammar errors to enojy it. I hope you get an editor it seems like a good story but with all the errors it's hard to read and enjoy it.
either fuck her and marry her or fuck her fire then marry her.i vote for the first one cause when point out that your boss let his son almost destroy the company you will get his job