All Comments on 'Kate & Jim Ch. 04'

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john1946john1946over 10 years ago
OK

5 For the story this far. I look forward to more

hillsofarkhillsofarkover 10 years ago
drifted

I was kind of disappointed. There was a real good story line going here with sex, and this chapter pretty much went all sex.

The story made the sex.

The sex did not make the story.

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