All Comments on 'Kate Seeks Revenge'

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

I'd say Kate did a fine job of it. The Hamiltons might be ready to sell land and cattle....cheap.

Moral---don't fuck over Roy.

Kate's OK and Roy too :) Better beware of her wrath though :)

She is almost as real as the woman I am actually married to. No one messes with her family.

However, 1 page is too short and only gets a 4 star rating.

Oh yeah, she reminds me of my wife. Don't try to take advantage of or harm her family. In that situation she is more lethal than a mother bear protecting her cubs.

Kate is a strong woman and Roy is lucky to have her. The author gave all the important facts and background but I would have liked the story to be longer. That's just because I enjoyed it so much.

Thank you for your hard work.

Woodmanone

An enjoyable entertaining story.

Wish I could find a woman like Kate! She takes no crap from no one. And she is super smart.

Best BTB (Burn The Bastards) story ever

Confused, inane, incoherent, poorly oaced

God damned autocorrect makes me seem stupid, but not as ridiculous as the story.

I might have inadvertently submitted my last comment before I was finished but at least I was worried about my writing and formatting.

What do you worry about? This was horrible. There is a plot here I suppose but all your characters are cartoons. So much cliche and obvious development.