All Comments on 'Kate's Christmas Job'

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Just like the review title says, this story is curiously devoid of emotion. Although fairly formulaic, there were a couple of nice touches, but overall the impression was that of having been written by a robot.

I will have to disagree with the previous comment. Midways in this story I could kind of be of those thoughts, but then came the ending. I specially enjoyed those small stories inside, eg. the bus. The altering POW is also a neat trick and is used very effectively. The ending made some interesting turns and was indeed complete. Many writers tend to cut their ending short, but not here!

Good spelling and language as such. A clear 5 - hands down!

Anderlecht

anderlechtreader(at)yahoo.com

got me all wet and hot yet once again.

I have read a couple of your stories in the last few days, I have to say they are superb

This one is no exception. Please continue writing