All Comments on 'Katherine'

Is this supposed to be a story?

Why would Mrs. Jenkins teach high school when her salary couldn’t begin to cover the cost of her clothes?

Do yoi have any idea how much work it is to maintain heair so long that the braid touches her backside? Or how heavy it is? There is no way she would go hunting with that much weight on her head.

I don’t know how old you are; but you’re obviously a virgin. Go away. Don’t write about sex until you’ve had it a few times.

Graduate grade school before writing high school and college stories.

What was the point ?

A story that didn't go anywhere.

That was a big nothing. I thought that she would come tumbling down and he would rescur her, with the appropriate thanks, or that he'd find her alone and nude.

Huh? WTF was that?

Sorbs, that was Greek to me. Maybe if she had put a broadhead into him, it would have made some sense.

A very nice slice of an interesting pie F the haters.

WTF-1*

Well you'll get tossed from the Cuck clique because you clearly accidently deleted a whole section of this. So tomorrow you'll send in the full one and hope you can earn back some favor.

Either that or you dont troll well.

A short story?