All Comments on 'Kathy'

A good story but you could have done a little more with it . Maybe a part 2 and spice it up some.

Fantastic story!

Good start. . needs some spicing up. . .to get it more interesting. . . Would love to be Vanessa. . Looking forward to reading the next part of this story.

Though I'm more into mom/son stories, this has potential. I would like to see where this goes.

The set up is way too clinical and not sexy at all. Is it supposed to absolve the father of responsibility? I didn't buy it. Might as well own it. It would be sexier.

Seriously, how many times did you have to write that line?

You need to use a dictionary and look up some different descriptive words.

Not many people sound like pirates while fucking nor do they say, "I'm cumming!!!"

Ugh, bleh!

No stars.

Loved it.