All Comments on 'Katie in Costa Rica Pt. 01'

who find your story too unfocused. It doesn't seem to have a point. Sentences are generally well-written, but they don't tell a story. The first time you used the phrase "Count me among . . ." I liked it because it's unusual. But the second time in a one-page story was too much.

You have enough ideas in your story for several stories. None of them about Costa Rica. Just decide which one you're going to tell and write that story.

Please continue!

Can't wait to see more!

Please write more!