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by rifkinraf

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Jedd11Jedd11over 9 years ago
Meh

So-so, but at least in my opinion, not as good as the first two. Others may disagree. Still, keep writing, because no one hits it out of the park every time. I'm not saying it was bad, just not like your first two. Keep going.

rifkinrafrifkinrafover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks Jedd11!

Thanks for the constructive criticism Jedd11! Your comments are way more helpful than most. I feel kinda the same way about this one. Something is off with the execution.

Owl4Owl4over 9 years ago
Well done.

Really enjoying this series. Looking forward to the stories of the days to come.

pois1pois1over 9 years ago
Hot!

I love the way this is escalating, and I can't wait to see what these bitches get up to next. I'm looking forward to reading all the rough sex in future chapters - particularly the rough, sloppy blowjobs you excel so much at writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

This is great more please!

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Thank you for the warm welcome back. I've been working on more serious projects, but it feels good to be on this side again.

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