All Comments on 'Katie's Submission Ch. 01-04'

I was enjoying this until the last chapter. I dont want to read of male involvement in a lesbian story. Not my thing im afraid . uptil then good.

The story was good up until the final chapter; I didn't like the male involvement. Not only that but you focus way too much on how Demi shares her with others. That's the best the Domme could do? Order her to please strangers? Normally, I would rate such a story with 3 stars but I give you 4 because it's well written.

I completely agree. Nothing drives me crazier than seeing male participation in a Lesbian themed story. ***BUT***, in this instance the critics are off base. This is a BDSM category story. As such, I just skipped over the parts where the guy was involved. I sincerely hope there is more to come from this story and maybe some of it will be in the Lesbian category.

Really loved how his one started out!

Ed

Don't let the purists hating on your male interlude get you down. A well written & very erotic tale. Looking forward to the next chapters!

I take the same view as other readers about the adding of a man, but it does not, for me, take away from the excellence, so I am happy to give 5 for what is a hot and sexy read.

I like the story it is well written from the first person stand point. Interesting how adding the Male character in the story seems to upset people in a Lesbian BDSM Story. I find that it may just be away of her Mistress dominating her. In the end, the main character and her mistress do get together. Wondering what the next chapters will be like - hot as these I hope.

A genre I very seldom read, but have already read two of soppingwet's-Becca & Flight Risk-and quite enjoyed so thought I'd give this a whirl, and quite enjoying so far-wasn't put off at all by Miguel-it's labeled BDSM-and what Mistress wants she gets-Katie's had cock before, and Demi chowing down on her and then snowballing hot, and would indicate she's had experience with spunk 1st hand herself in past.

Only surprise so few comments....5 + fave.

Very well written by a writer with clear command of her craft.