by Hamlin
loved the story would like to see more chapters, thereapist will, katrina and others
Excellent!! Blowjob addiction is a wonderful thing, and you've expressed it well with Katrina!!
Please don't go down this path again. One of the reasons I follow you, besides you being a talented author, is that you don't usually mess about in the LW cesspool. I'd like to keep following you for a long time.
You're a Non-con/Incest guy masquerading as a LW author with this story. Stick to what you know. This story was probably better suited for non-con. Not good.
Being happy to be married to that would be like being happy to kiss the bottoms of all the garbage cans on your block. Buy stocks in a good mouthwash and toothpaste company and get bi-monthly STI tests, hopefully you can divorce it before it gives you something incurable.
I normally like your stories, but this one is just sooo stupid.
Ends up being a cuck tale, untagged as well.
I really don’t want to comment any more, suffice to say you are better than this
Scores 1/5, hope for a better story next time.
Hi,
Did you abandon the Second Place Sister ?
I don't even remember when you updated the story.
I love cum shut stories and fantasize about having one as a horny hot wife. But u have to tell the true story of my first masturebation experience. I had shared a room with my mother until nearly a teenager and was a late bloomer even in masturebation. My first experience masturbating was so pleasurable I lost consciousness and came too while my head and heart were still pounding while breathing heavily. You want to know about me and my feeling and reactions to blowjobs and blowjob stories
AND how they came about !!!!
This story seems to have a lot of negative reviews but I'm not entirely sure why. It may have felt just a little bit rushed but the concept was interestingly fleshed out and your writing is always there. Nice work!
It seems to me that some people are simply casting about for excuses to disapprove. I see nothing at all incestuous or non-consensual about this story. It is a story about a loving, if unconventional, relationship between a compassionate and understanding husband and his wife, who happens to have an unusual and difficult addiction. Definitely appropriate for the Loving Wives category.
LW is a weird category. The readers of LW seem to get off on the wife cheating but feeling guilty about it. Your characters are just the opposite. In your other stories that I've read, your characters, even when forced into sex, come around to enjoying it. As an experiment, you might try withdrawing this story and resubmitting in another category where the readers are more supportive of your character's kinks. I think you'll get a much higher rating than here.