All Comments on 'Katy's Birthday Spanking'

by k_d_worth

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josephstevensjosephstevensover 9 years ago
Brilliant first!

Thank you so much for this story. It is very good...and has given me an idea for my next spanking session...! Hope more is to come from you..the spanking scene needs good stories like this to get the juices flowing...

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 9 years ago
What a marvellous introduction ...

... to a wonderful talent! Welcome to Literotica, k_d_worth, and thank you so much for this amazing story! Well done, five stars and more like it, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
very good first

I liked it,you need to try some more

ham_sandwichham_sandwichover 9 years ago
Great first posting!

Excellent writing. Maybe for the sequel, you could do some character development and tell us how both of them got to be the way they are. Maybe make us relate to them as real people. One other suggestion: be aware of the difference between breath and breathe, and lose and loose. FIVE STARS!

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