All Comments on 'Katy's Body Pt. 02'

I like that the story is taking us places and there is a progression. But it reads like a memoir, which seems to be the intent, which is to say, rather flat. None of the episodes is told with the immediacy of the narrator's sensory experience, sensual response etc- or much dialog- so it's not especially *sexy for that reason. I'm interested with Katy's journey, but not unless I can learn more of what it *feels like to her.

Absolutely terrible format. One page at a time and you say you have an editor. Get a new editor and put some effort into your stories.

The woman is beautiful ... I totally love her tight, small tit body!! And the storyline quite compelling!!! But the presentation reads like a medical text book... Hoping for some emotion. passion, and dirty pleasure in the upcoming chapters!! But the photos of the beautiful, submissive, woman has me locked in!!

Excellent Review 5*

"He was of Indian origin, comparatively young and very good looking" ! Yumm!