by PhilCanyon
Loved it Phil. I read this series the first time around and enjoyed it, but it's much better this time with the pictures.
Thanks.
Thanks for reading this story. I hope you enjoyed it. A special thanks to those that left comments! A very, very special thanks goes to Cheryl and Bob for their artwork!!!
I loved how Katy (Cheryl) fucks Larry in his sleep and those wonderful legs and smooth tight ass are driving me wild. Hope it was as much of a turn on taking those pictures as it is to see them over and over again.
phil, i haven't read it yet , but finally, one that's really illustrated.
I've been waiting months for part 3 and I wasn't disappointed !! Great characters, well written and Cheryl makes a great Katy. Hopefully, we won't wait too long for part 4. Great work all around...keep them coming.
I'm a straight female and I got so turned on by your story- especially with the pictures. I'm so wetttt
The pics alone are worth it... but the story is very well written and very erotic
A woman this hot needs to have at least one picture and story where she takes charge with a strap on.
Read this story with my wife last and we were both turned on by the story and picks... it led to some fun times. Keep this story line cumming! Can't get enough. Well done.
Ew hairy old lady pussy other than the fact that she's old as the hills this story got me pretty wet
Good story the wife should dress and show her body at home with the kids like nudist moms do.
And the illustrations? What is the point of displaying some old hag with wrinkled skin?
Those pics are a perfect compliment to the story. That gal is incredibly fine! I'd really to see her beautiful face. I would love to fuck her soooo good (I guess that's the point of the scintillation). She's very sexy!
Those pics are a perfect compliment to the story. That gal is incredibly fine! I'd really to see her beautiful face. I would love to fuck her soooo good (I guess that's the point of the scintillation). She's very sexy!
I hate ignorant comments made by idiots. Especially when they are anonymous. I love your story. I love your model for the pics. I wonder how many of the ignorant assholes who comment on these stories has someone willing to get in front of the camera for them? Keep writing. Never let ignorant assholes discourage you. And tell your model she is beautiful and has an amazing body!! She added so much to your story.
Your writing is great you have real talent. But I don't think I'm going to continue reading this story. I don't like the way Katy is responding to all the things he's doing to her. It's very I don't know unrealistic? I've never met a single woman who would let those kind of things go on. Don't get me wrong I'm into Dom/sub relationships. I'm just not sure if that's what you were aiming for? So any way your a great writer and everything but I won't be continueig simply because it doesn't tickle my fansie :)
Also,whomever this model is, she is extraordinary beautiful and very photogenic. Thank you.....
I most certainly did not , not enjoy that !!! It’s not proper for me to tell you that this story and the accompanying photos are the hottest thing on this site !!! Great author , beautifully sexy model , what a winning combination!!!