All Comments on 'Katy's Smell: Day 01'

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE THIS STORY GOES.

I love how this story started now it's time to get to the solution to this complex relationship. Who is going to tell the wife and mother ? How do they find out? I just can't wait to see how it unfolds.

I too can't wait for more. However I am having trouble reconciling the love he has with his sister and the love and commitment necessary to marry Adrienne. I'd like to see how you handle it in later chapters. Keep going.

He loves his sister and wife? wtf, he really aint being truthful to both the women, no matter how much he loves his sister. Such a loser, he was fucking sister and had time and heart to love another woman enough to marry her, have a kid and spoil her life. This is why Incest is a crime. Females are weak at heart and are usually at the receiving end. BTW nicely written, gave 5 stars.

Lol thnx

This is a wonderful depiction of emotional conflict and submission to desire. I think I might know how it will turn out, but then I'm possibly wrong, so I won't say. but now on to Ch.2.

finish story

Have been a fan for long time and this is some of your best .Great to see your writing again . Was reading you when you we just ( _ ) and you still one of the best on here ..

incest is a crime? Because of who? Because the brainwashing of so-called 'norms' that slaves in today's society pass around? Because terror-crats (so-called authorities and governments say so?). Wake up and see reality.

A tidal wave of emotions. Reminds me of the feelings I get whenever I am forced into proximity with my ex-fiance. You do a masterful job here as with all your work. Keep it up!

Hard to find rly emotional take on incest these days. 5/5

Where there is a will there is a way and I am sure Adrienne and Katy will work it all out

and the title, and the scene with wife in the tub.

Looking forward to see how you spin this out.

I really love the intensity and the passion between the two characters. Stories that are grounded in authentic human emotion are always the most fun to read and the most enjoyable.

with michapfan's comments. It is the Authentic Human Emotion that makes this story genuine erotica. Keeps you on the edge of anticipation. Don't know where this is going but it is beautiful so far. 5* -dave

with comments by michapfan. It is the Authentic Human Emotion that makes this story genuine erotica. The account of his and Katy's exploration and losing their virginity to the other when they were adolescents was particularly interesting. The history of their dad dying when they were young and mom working shift work (leaving them alone together) made this also seem so plausible. The three year separation without family get-togethers or even talking is a sad thought. I wonder how many times this has actually happened in real life. 5* -dave

Enjoying this tale immensely

O M G . . .W O W ! ! !

What a story. So emotional and so well written...

No way they can keep this a secret. I have a feeling that Adrienne will discover the truth, and she’ll not mind...Too much...

This is one of the hottest things ive ever encountered . Very well done . Ny depraved mind is very appreciative .

This is the exact dynamic ive always craved from incest stories. I have no internet in parent/offspring stuff. Only siblings and i love that its so deeply emotional as well as physical for them. Usually its just a smut story or one is super reluctant but gives in to pressure and it feels awkward. Love this story

Well, I hate cheating. He obviously cheated on his sister when he married Adrienne, and now he's cheating on his wife and daughter... Sorry, but i don't like that.

This is SSSOOO appealing; with the emotional aspect to their relationship, the rest is 'peripheral' noise.

Mom and Adrienne seem to be more than understanding when it comes to siblings and their attachments...I think they both know, and this is going to work out well, all the way around...

Five**5**Stars...🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💥💥💥💥💥💯