All Comments on 'Kaye's Trip to the Islands'
by frederickson866
- 8 Comments
Anonymous12 months agoGood story: does need an editor and someone to watch for the spelling of homophones.
Also: MackinaW is only the spelling of the city at the top of the Lower Penninsula; the island and the bridge are both spelled MackinaC.
Rapierwit2460112 months agoA wonderful romance - absolutely loved it
So, five stories of traversing the three TRULY Great Lakes. Between them, many, many weeks of sailing - and it didn’t rain once??? That was the wildest fantasy of them all!
You’ve been favorited and I’m looking forward to more stories of any genre.
ProfQ195512 months agoThanks for combining sailing and erotica made for an enjoyable rainy afternoon. Now I have to go get drained.
amb1krb12 months agoSome spell it Macinaw and some Macinac... either is acceptable and freely used. You say tomato ....
Great story... love the fact that your showing more proof that your in my neighborhood... Beaver Is is not well known and the love hate for Mackinaw shows your a local!
Wondering if the boat is a true part of these stories...
ScottishTexan11 months agoYou did pretty good on the nautical bits, however...
"I stepped away from the kitchen and decided it would be better if I just assisted."
It's NOT a kitchen!!! It's a Galley!!!!
[SMH] 4/5
Anonymous9 months ago3*
No proper explanation of why she treated him poorly during school and college!!
No mention of her children or life, except we know she is a cashier and has a roommate!!
This man is really pussywhipped
