All Comments on 'Kayfabe'

Omg, loved this!

Not at all what I was expecting. Amazing story. Would love more of her and the secret society, but I understand if this is a one off with her. More in this universe would be great though. Thank you for this unique take on mind control.

Sexy, brilliant and hilarious. Well done.

This was a very funny story with non-typical stereotyped tropes. I love Sarah's inner dialogue. She has to be the most clueless of people. Echo seemed really hot. More stories with these two as partners against "evil" would be really cool.

Awesome, unlike anything I've read here.

Hahahahahahahaa, that was an absolute riot. 12/10

He he he! Loved it!

That's hilarious, of course she's going to be half succubus in the end but still...

This is good and you should feel good about it.

"Stop resisting my powers!"

"Okay"

... boom! Awesome.

Sexy AND hilarious, cannot rate higher than 5 or I would. Great job!

Easily my favorite story I've discovered in years. Awesome!

It's not often I find a story that I can't decide if I find funnier or hotter, but this is that rare breed. Very well done!

And she still has no clue! That is frackin' HILARIOUS!!

Loved it - hilarious!

lol 5*

Loved this!

Fantastic!

its was so good but more detail pls

really funny

That scratched an itch I didnt know I had. Great idea.

The technique of having people engage in a dialog in which each totally mistakes the intentions and meanings of the others without quite realizing it is very well done.

Anyone know the significance of the title? Doesn't ring a bell with any of the story.

Or maybe I'm just clueless.

It’s a wrestling term. It’s a sort of social contract between the industry and the audience to both pretend that everything that happens is real and authentic instead of staged.