All Comments on 'Kayla and the Pool Boy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it!! Will we ever see more of the sprout series?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Never fail to deliver! You have become my all time favorite writer in any genre. Please continue! Kayla, MacKenzie and Sophie are Goddesses!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well done. More Kayla is needed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was wonderful! She is the ultimate alpha! I wish he would have waited for the wine to reach her abs and lick the wine off contours of her abs before reaching her capris. This is a 5 star story.. wait.. an infinite number of stars story! The possibilities are endless. Please, please, please make this story into a series. Your writing is incredible!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

...and lap off the wine from the small moles in Kayla's sexy midsection too.

subadubdub283subadubdub283over 2 years ago

LOVED your story. Your writing is spectacular! Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lovely story! Whatever keeps you writing in good with. Haven't been disappointed yet.

LI KerwellLI Kerwellover 2 years ago

This is an exceptionally well written story. I loved the Gulliver’s Travels reference!

At any rate the writing of this author never ceases to develop. Probably his best written story he’s had to date.

The storyline itself was filled with original ideas. That’s tough to do really.

Great job. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

this would be fabulous as a series. would like to see this delve into some more cuckolding themes

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story is amazing, you're my favourite writer on here. Love the armpit worship, would love to know Kayla's foot size. Can't wait until she owns him with her huge strapon. Can't wait for more!

SpygmanSpygmanover 2 years ago

This is another great story, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is the series continuing?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I miss Kayla. I'm Kayla's little bitch!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Any update on a follow-up? It- definitely deserves a multi-part series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please make a follow up. Would love to know her big foot size and more armpit worship. Amazing writer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow! Just wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Any chance, you'll resume this story?

downbeat8downbeat8about 1 year ago

great sexy story!

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