All Comments on 'Kayla's Afternoon Adventure'

How come she's selling 'fists'?

Proof read!!

You do need to proof read, but we all make mistakes! Don't worry about the people who criticize you on the speeling or words like they haven't made mistakes before on their writing! Like I said awesome story hopefully there is a CH. 2!

this seems to be a grand opening for what I'm hoping is a series of stories. What happens when bobby delivers the dress? What about the aunt and bobby? and possibly the aunt and Kayla. Great start. looking forward to more!

No proof of her hubby cheating so she goes out and cheats? Nice story but the story line sucks.

Gave it a 3 because that's the number of letters in the word that you misspelled!