All Comments on 'Keep It in the Family'

Boring and vanilla

Started ok, but 2nd page turned to crap, what a shithead to say he loves her and then let some fool rape her, never read it to the end!!

Started out great and became totally trash 2 stars I actually finished reading this to give an honest review and it sucks the sudden switch of the MC character totally throws the entire build up off and he rapes his own mother under the guise of being a friend named pete... Well Pete ruins this hole tail and it would have been better without it because its clear that the mother actually doesn't like it which ruins the mood you only get to stars for a good beginning and a good ending this story needs a total rewrite in the middle

the chracter pete trashed your story which was fine till halfway.

I liked it. Four stars.

Loved when he brought in pete!

I love how many people don't realize that Mike and Pete are the same person.

Mike used the fake persona in case mom REALLY hated being dominated, he could abandon the idea and the character would never be seen or heard from again, with no repercussions to the relationship. Even Mom didn't get it until the truth was whispered in her ear.

If you choose to do a rewrite, DON'T let HDblackheart help. He can't even write a bad review without seventeen spelling and grammar errors.

Liked the story until Pete came in

Get an editor. Please.

Another round of applause. BRAVO !!! JEF