All Comments on 'Keep It in the Family Pt. 17'

The robots threw me off a bit and it’s hard to say if they’re family. Even that little criticism I really hope you keep with the series.

All of this was really fun up until the sudden bout of depression Susan feels here. Her reasons are justified, and she most certainly should've seen the dangers of making a sexier version of herself, but it was like my heart was stabbed along with SueBot's. Hopefully we can have a conclusion that involves a redemption for Susan and being able to return to the family. Crossing my fingers!

I'm working on it, and once I figure out the transition, there are a few chapters of enjoyable incest fun left for her

I was falling sleep with the narrative and then certainly pick up my interest again.