All Comments on 'Keeping Secrets'

Great stuff, reminds me of your story "Unknown". Have to read that again now. 5★

I usually pass on lesbian stories, then I realized this is a JimBob44 story. His stories are usually pretty good, regardless of genre. Another great story that just happens to be about 2 women. 5👍✨

Sorry to be so unimaginative, but all I can say is "Great story!"

One of your best, loved the cobra venom!

One of your very best.

Every story by JimBob44 is worth reading

What a great, ruthless revengeful and romantic story. Top notch writing. Well laid out, strong, don’t give a shit female characters. Couldn’t put it down. This quality story telling is what your faithful readers enjoy.

Great

Excellent story.

Great story. I couldn’t stop reading until I got to the end. Five stars as usual. Thanks for sharing your work with us!

best story I have read for a long time. Great work

Awesome story, always like your characters and story telling.

That was awesome. Best revenge story I’ve read in a long time. Thanks

Truly one of your best, in terms of plot. The characters were up to your usual high standard, as well, but the wonderful romp was the main attraction.

Wow, some serious retribution in this one. Excellent! 5 stars

Brutal but great. Couldn’t stop reading it. So pleased there was a happy ending. It’s not always guaranteed with you

Thank you

Excellent reading as always! Good characters, storyline and dialogue. All boxes checked for entertainment and enjoyment. Please do keep writing for your pleasure and I will keep reading for my phone enjoyment. Yes 5 stars and I have favorite JimBob44 works!

Nice idea. But really, really needs the oversight of the author rereading their own story before passing it to someone to edit it. Way too many missing words, mainly in dialogue. It isn't difficult: I tell it to my pupils at the start of every term. In fact having the characters try and speak with a stutter or mumbling doesn't help unless you explain that fact; combine that with the dropped words and you introduce confusion.

Also there were a lot of names mentioned, possibly once at the beginning then dropped in suddenly at the end before being killed off, that made me stop and try to figure out who was who and what relevance they were to the story.

But, please, get an editor.

You overused the 'bitch' insults and named so many irrelevant characters.