All Comments on 'Keeping the Secret'

I enjoyed cumming to your story.

Tell us more about your slutty life.

She would do anything for her husband? What if he told her he wanted their fantasies to remain fantasies and not reality. What if he said he wanted a monogomaous marriage? Would she do that for him or is she only willing to do anything for him that involves what she wants? Considering she has fucked his friends and some of their friends and apparently still does...what does that tell you about how much she loves her husband?

can. There's a lot more commin' in.

i can not wait for more, she is so hot, iknow she will love the black cock she will finally get ,

and they will love her hot pussy

I want to thank those of you who leave positive comments and I would like to address people who comment as anonymous. How afraid can you be to leave your member name or e-mail when you send feedback to my e-mail. I am sorry if my writing is like a teenage boy and I'm sorry that some of you say my stories are no good. Oh well, I am having fun and I will continue to write. For those of you who cut me down, you are cutting down someone based on stories that could be purely fictional. But whether they are or not only I know.

If so, that is pretty pathetic and immature. If you can not take the heat, get out of the kitchen! Debra CA

She clearly is planning on going black for herself, and she rationalizes that it is to satisfy her husband's fantasy, a fantasy she surmises due to finding a secret video in her husband's dresser. But as another pointed out, it might be simply a fantasy and not something he wishes to try for real. And I think it is a pretty low betrayal for her to have gotten pregnant while cheating with one of hubby's friends . . . Of course, Kenny is pretty clueless and the story is in that respect similar to many written by women on this site. That is, portraying men as dumb and easy to manipulate. One other observation, I think this story would be better in Interracial rather than LW.

the good with the bad, or else shut off your feedback. You have the potential to become a good writer, but I'm not pleased where this story is going. This story has cuckold written all over it and you can expect some flack. Not a popular theme. Suggest you place the continuation under the "interracial" genre. If cuckold and male humiliation is going to be your primary themes, that's not my erotic preferences. Sorry to see another potential good writer exhaust this unpopular theme in erotica. But that's just me. Different strokes for different folks. Thanks for the entertainment. Good luck with your continued effort in writing. ML

Which secret were you talking about, that she is a slut or that she found a CD in her hubby's dresser? This slut is ready for any man any place any way in the quise of love????? No way, she is just a cock hungery slut and Kenny is another wimp husband.

IF the author is taking off the comments that are mean and non-constructive. I am okay with that. You all may have the right to your own opinion, that does not mean the rest of us have to listen to it.

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You have talent. If people don't like the type of content you are creating, they can read somewhere else. As for Debra, where does she come off complaining about how you may or may not be handling negative comments.

Some people may not like the content, but so what. No author is universally appreciated.

it's not even about your story. it's about your attitude writing the story. your characters lack all respect and decency. if you think that's the key for an erotic story, well I hope you get some "nice" surprises.

To hell with the haters. If they are dumb enough to read a story KNOWING what it is about then to hell with their small-dicked selves. If you notice, it's almost always little white boys. I know, I'm married to one.

Congratulations!!!

Husband has a secret interracial fantasy

He also has a secret gay fantasy too, but you knew that, most of you weak little dudes do.