Fantastic character development coupled with crisp pacing. Nuanced, suggestive, efficient and effective. Well written and arousing, all the more so as a first story posted. Looking forward to more.
Please stop asking me what I'm looking for - I don't know, and truthfully, nobody knows what they're really looking for in life. So I'm here, to write, to read, to chat. Come what may (pun absolutely intended). Complete sentences and proper grammar are a must.