All Comments on 'Keira's Nightie'

So far so good. Looking forward to hearing more.

I was a little hesitant because I saw such a low rating next to this, but it was a great start to what I hope will be a continued story between these two.

Appreciate the nice comments, will be adding more to this story soon :)

Love this and can’t wait for more. Rock hard while on a work call and jerking off

Can tell you’re a white person who’s never been around actual black people because what the heck was that dialogue

Really glad to hear there is more to come.

Nothing to elevate it above any other story, it's just a hotchpotch of words and situations lifted from other stories, total lack of imagination.

Nice! I like the start and look forward to more...

You need to write more then one page. One page stories are okay if it ends the story, but if it's a long story you need to write at least 2 to 3 pages.

Very carefully.

Good start.

Please continue.

Ok fair enough to the comment about the black dialogue. It's bad but it's kinda meant to be, like a caricature of how white suburban people think black thugs talk. And tbh I wasn't sure if Keira was gonna get blacked at that point. But I developed the story more now and spiced it up so I doubt I'll go down that road.

What an idiot! Bro is dumber that shit. Just put them back dumbass.