All Comments on 'Kelli'

Long series please, great characters

I can’t wait to see what happens next!

Enjoyed it. Very hot. Seems like there is a lot of directions this story can go. And i am hoping you'll cover all of them. Don't take too long for the next installment please. And thank your for writing and sharing.

HStoner specialises in tales about nudity and this one maintains the quality to which he adheres. It is a well told story and makes the reader want to turn the page. What we would of course like is a sequel.

Thank you for sharing a fun little story!

Kelly Stoufer Quarterbacked the Seattle Seahawks from 1988 to 1992. Just some sports trivia. Great story.

Good story very well told. It was doubly fascinating since many of my stories are centered in Ohio, Columbus and include Ohio State as well. Good job.

Love the story!

A sequel with perhaps a naked marriage ceremony and a sexual consummation that's watched by the immediate family sounds intriguing.....

more please

My only problem is some of us sunburn in about 15 seconds, even with sunscreen

#1, You write very well!

#2, This seemed believable (well, almost)

#3, I look forward to more!!

Don't get me wrong, I liked it a lot, but something seems to be missing. A conclusion?

You should turn this into series. There are a lot of potential additional stories that would add to this very well. For example,a story exploring the parents and their friends swapping partners. Especially,if it were to involve openly exhibiting with the younger generation.