All Comments on 'Kelly'

WOW. I loved it! Very good build up. His reluctance (if that's the word?) Her antipication then his. Exquisitely done. The set up was great. I dearly wish I could have been so considerate to a virgin when I was younger. Ah the things I've learned in my years. I'd be interested to see what happens after this night ended. Well done.

3 stars

DragonRider55

Well done! Lusciously and erotically well articulated.

nonromantic in a romantic way, wish I knew back in the day what I know now and let the virgins take their own virginities by being on top instead of just plunging my cock in. wish he would have eaten her out first, I always eat out my women first to give them their first orgasm.

Perfect! Sweet, romantic and still extremely erotic. Am definitely hoping for a chapter two.

J

Thanks for the story. Not sure I agree with the first person decision. I'm not reducing my score though.

Also, could have fit in taboo...deflowering the daughter of a friend. But good - good job.

Thanks for sharing

I really enjoyed this fantasy and well worth 5 stars. The question and answer part with Kelly was very juicy.

That was a bloody beauty. 5*

Very entertaining ,Im going to read it again and this time Put myself in her shoes. Thanks for A new fantasy!

Outstanding !

Good premise.

But sex, when it happened, was much too fast. Too automatic.

Why did she have to be so good at giving a blowjob? Better if she'd needed/wanted to learn how to suck a cock. Needed instructions/directions. Needed dialog about whether he liked what she was doing. Needed some suggestions about how she shou;d have handled his cock. And what to do -- and not do -- to his balls.

Three stars.

Lovely! I think that the words that we use for first sex are wrong. We talk of "losing your virginity", a negative term, when we should be celebrating the man or woman not losing something, but experiencing sexual pleasure and gaining sexual experience.