by Lancerlott
Lovely! I think that the words that we use for first sex are wrong. We talk of "losing your virginity", a negative term, when we should be celebrating the man or woman not losing something, but experiencing sexual pleasure and gaining sexual experience.
Good premise.
But sex, when it happened, was much too fast. Too automatic.
Why did she have to be so good at giving a blowjob? Better if she'd needed/wanted to learn how to suck a cock. Needed instructions/directions. Needed dialog about whether he liked what she was doing. Needed some suggestions about how she shou;d have handled his cock. And what to do -- and not do -- to his balls.
Three stars.
Very entertaining ,Im going to read it again and this time Put myself in her shoes. Thanks for A new fantasy!
I really enjoyed this fantasy and well worth 5 stars. The question and answer part with Kelly was very juicy.
Thanks for the story. Not sure I agree with the first person decision. I'm not reducing my score though.
Also, could have fit in taboo...deflowering the daughter of a friend. But good - good job.
Perfect! Sweet, romantic and still extremely erotic. Am definitely hoping for a chapter two.
J
nonromantic in a romantic way, wish I knew back in the day what I know now and let the virgins take their own virginities by being on top instead of just plunging my cock in. wish he would have eaten her out first, I always eat out my women first to give them their first orgasm.
WOW. I loved it! Very good build up. His reluctance (if that's the word?) Her antipication then his. Exquisitely done. The set up was great. I dearly wish I could have been so considerate to a virgin when I was younger. Ah the things I've learned in my years. I'd be interested to see what happens after this night ended. Well done.
3 stars
DragonRider55