by CowboyRick
About halfway through it became obvious why you have fewer followers than stories. This one was pure silliness.
trite, rotten to core for being too nice and politically correct
not believable
DON'T LET THOSE ANONYMOUS S***H***'S BOTHER YOU.IF THEY HAD ANY BALL'S THEY WOULDN.T BE COMMENTING AS ANONYMOUS.
Good read , nice plot. Bur to rushed in timeline, she is bad wounded but has the very night hot sex.