All Comments on 'Ken and Sally's Story Ch. 03'

to know when you're going to finish the story

don't get me wrong i love brother sister incest but only stories that are realistic and believable this story was neither i know their happyness won't last one of them will get jealous or hurt and the shit will hit the fan the parents will find out and so will the public incest has to be kept to a minimum number of people involved to work and be believable

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dr kink loved your stories but are you doing a 4th chapter of this from sally and stan view then the wedding and moving into the house

what a fab story all you have to do is add another chapter stan and sally part kept me hyard

... agree with the other comments.

I see from your Bibliography that you last Posted in 2004.

Having seen the standards of this series I think that was a wise thing to do.

In Chapter 02 you got words mixed up - examples -

1."… also looking presentable to perspective clients." - prospective!

2."… We have never been alone with our perspective spouses" - respective!

In all Chapters your command of spelling, grammar and punctuation seems perfunctory, to say the least.

Very early on you shouild have got yourself a GOOD Proof-Reader and/or Editor.

Frankly I'm sorry for the time that I've wasted reading this series!

Talk about build up the tension and leave you hanging !

So very disappointing.

But after 12 years, I guess we ain't gonna get any more, are we ?

Getting another couple involved is not good if you love your sibling the way you confess not going to end well never does I know

i think they find there match they were looking for. they dont love there siblings any more{ oh they love them but not as lover} so they marry each others brothers and sister and live happily and never fuck their sisters or brothers

Getting another couple involved fucked it up. Started off withgreat potential.

Talk about a massive disapointment !

Just 1 star for really annoying me.........

Loved the series. Has/had such great potential for subsequent chapters; Stan and Sally's escapades, honeymoon, living arrangements at the house (who sleeps in which bedroom, how often switch, etc), and so on. Disappointed it didn't continue. Perhaps another author could pick it up? 5 stars.

Loved the series. Has/had such great potential for subsequent chapters; Stan and Sally's escapades, honeymoon, living arrangements at the house (who sleeps in which bedroom, how often switch, etc), and so on. Disappointed it didn't continue. Perhaps another author could pick it up? 5 stars.

Such a disappointment...........

Rapier

Why write a series if you are not going to finish it. 1 star