All Comments on 'Kenkou Journey Ch. 01'

You have true talent. If you should ever desire a editor it would be my pleasure to volunteer.

Very nice story, sir. Strongly reminiscent of the novel Demons Don't Dream by Piers Anthony, I thought.

Only problems I had is that it could've used a little bit more editing/proofreading, and there were a couple of parts that confused me to no end (most notably, the bit when Harabec is climbing down to the Cyclops cave, with the rope being tossed.)

Loved it wouldn't change a thing keep up the good work

Great so far, the Yuki-Onna was wonderful. I hope we see more of her later...

Also, have you considered posting this on the Monster Girl Unlimited fanfiction section at monstergirlunlimited.com? Its a site that mainly focuses on Kenkou's monster girls, although some people write fanfictions in homebrewed universes. Anyway, not enough good fanfiction is posted there, so if you did decide to post it I'm sure it'd be appreciated.

Confused Anonymous, talked to you on MSN about it. For those confused with him, picture a coat hanger-shaped rock sticking out of a cliff. Wrap a rope around that and tie to yourself, basically allows you to rappel down.

I'll definitely look into adding this series on the website once it's done, assuming I don't fumble up and ruin the later chapters. ^_^

Thanks again!

Moving on to the next chapter.

A cute adventure. I'd love to settle down with the Orcs.