All Comments on 'Kevin's Trip Pt. 02'

i think it needs a few more chapters.

Me like! Me like A lot!

What a Great Read, Great Writing, Great Story. It is just so hard to believe such ass holes exist on this planet that would complain about this or that with this fun story. I guess no matter what you write, some one will find something to complain about. But since it is a free sight, and obviously most folks can't write, that these complainers want to get their stupid 2 cents in. LOL It was a Great Little Story, Stop complaining, It didn't cost you anything! Thanks for the effort. I love a happy ending and busty nurses. LOL last time I was in the hopsital I had Nurse Rachet, who insisted I get two different shots before I could leave. I didn't want them, but I wanted out of the hospital more. LOL 5 stars for sure! #Buster2U

2 surprising stars. What turned out to be a story about a man's death at the hands of 2 of his wife's medical students, with some help from his wife, turned out to be a sci fi story. 400 years in the future? Combine both stories & tag it as sci fi so the reader will know. I generally like this author's work, but not this one. Bob

What in the name of all that's LW is this?

Well that was crap, what a terrible part two. WTF was that supposed to be?

This was fun, silly, and a nice palette cleanser. I think the last two commenters need to unclench, unwind, and learn how to laugh.

I quite liked this! This plot could make for a great series of stories!

You are so damned good with these stories

Great, but needs more

Definitely needs more

Hey MattBlackUK, Watch the Millennium, with Kris Kristofferson and Cheryl Ladd. This story reminds me of that movie. Good read 5Stars.

odd but likeable

Oh, it's got worse…. Just too silly

I have whiplash....

Interesting but definitely quite a different story from what we have come to expect from this venue!!