All Comments on 'Key Card Ch. 04'

by EMMsb

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Thrill ride from hell!

A bit extreme for my own taste but it stirred my curiosity on what that pain threshold and helplessness would be like. Nice writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love it!

Very nice! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fantasy??

That was a wonderful story - it WAS a fantasy, wasn't it?

Only a true submissive could understand how that reads, I must let my mistress read it!!!

MPsslavetommyMPsslavetommyover 13 years ago
WOW!

Mistress M sounded so much like my Mistress P in how She takes such plesure in Her slave's pain that I had to give Her the link to the start of the series. I'm not sure if I want Her to take any new ideas or not.

tommy

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Gulp!

I shudder to read it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great Story

Please continue this fantastic story!

wannasuckwannasuckabout 12 years ago
This is a really great series and I can hardly wait to see what happens next.

You're the master of erotica cliffhanger with this series. I anxiously await the next chapter in his rather realistic journey of extreme cbt. Please keep up the wonderful work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
So good !!

EMMsb has made a fantastic job of this story: any chance that I could swap places ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Enjoyment

Although you appear to be suffering a little, I cannot help but be so very envious of your pleasure, She will sure be most excellent using an E-Stim device. I am totally jealous.- Bear in mind, I am almost 84 years old, and I use E-stim daily for an HFO - and am so enthusiastic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I am so envious!

E-stim has never appealed to me, but the fantasy of someone putting a needle through my "eggs" makes me very...well you know! I hope she needles b's "eggs" again in another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I knew she loved me ....

Sure ?

We all make mistakes ....

subserviantsubserviantover 2 years ago

Great story,wish it was a lot longer .I have dreamed about being pierced in this maner

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