All Comments on 'Keys to My Heart'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fantastic

Great story as always, and possibly even gave some insight into your process. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wheels within wheels

Like the multiple levels to this one, nice technique

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Really hot

I liked the way he hypnotized her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This reminds me of the story of Erikson hypnotizing a secretary who complained about a headache by doing dictation, only for the secretary to report afterwards that her headache was gone.

Very well done, but I really want to know what happens next. Specifically, what happens the next day, or even after lunch break. Does she leave? Does she report him?

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