All Comments on 'Khara's Birthday Gift'

What better gift than filling your virgin daughters teenage cunt full of cock and cum

Getting pregnant is definitely better. I'm Stacy 18_bi at Hotmail if you want to hit me up

Hey guys, thanks for the feedback. I really did try on this and I promise my next story will let you see though her eyes what they all look like. The name of the next story: Khara Gets A Double Surprise. Feel free to speculate, but as time goes on I will release more details about their homeland and their might be some story building pieces if you wish to see them. I normally write fantasy and this was my first try at erotica. But if you keep being mighty fine patrons I would be honored to write the whole story.

My god... Typos for days. That's what you get when you write these things on an iPhone in the desert.

The story not bad, but damn proof read your stories. Check for grammer, typos, spelling, use of the correct word (to, too, two). Other then that keep trying.