All Comments on 'Kicked Out with My Daughter Ch. 05'

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captainilovetitsalotcaptainilovetitsalotabout 2 years agoAuthor

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CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxabout 2 years ago

ALMOST FOUR DAMN YEARS TOOK THIS ACTUALLY HAPPENING OFFICIALLY HAPPENING .............

EVEN WORSE - ZERO EXPLANATIONS ............... EVEN WORSE - SEEMS LIKE PICKUP FROM

WHAT LAST STORY ENDED (( ALMOST FOUR YEARS PASSED THAT STORY BEING RELEASED )) -

EVERYBODY MUSTA BEEN STUCK CRYOGENIC STASIS

Anonymous3000Anonymous3000about 2 years ago

Play with Antonio business gift today why are the phones that is about she's a feisty so she's a perfect go to bed song they found my phone but you don't have nothing. Well that people will fit just to go magical that's who we are Adidas What About Us what about tomorrow what are my mouth mannerable marijuana what are you doing this was just asking about the family Amanda

Anonymous3000Anonymous3000about 2 years ago

My mistake on this past comment. I did not know that I was still on voice texting.

Your stories are good, but the thing that makes me mad is her still talking like a baby.

"DWADDY" just get annoying to read. It messes up the story. I get turned on, but coming to her with that baby talk "Dwaddy" turns me off.

TessalyTessalyalmost 2 years ago

I like the story, but the grammatical mistakes get in the way, and the baby talk like "Dwaddy" comes across as super cringe to me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Baby talk ruined it.

rmdoffcrmdoffcover 1 year ago

Damn, how the hell i've missed to follow you, jezzzz, it's a miracle the i found the 5th part was posted. Now it's corrected.

5 stars anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story left us hanging at the end need more chapters though did she get pregnant what happened with the headmistress and the friend's

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is there more 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Would like more please write more. Excellent work

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This was poorly written..and the baby talk was ridiculous.. skipped the last page to get here and voice my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Ya gotta keep going with the story.

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