by hisemerald
Here I was thinking that she was a slave, and it turns out at the end that she was a Mistress! Amazing ending to a great story!
I thought it was great!! I love stories where women are taken by many men!!! It made me hot!!!
very well written and got to the good stuff quickly without alot of boring history about the characters. good reading when you're real horny and don't want to read all night.
I would like to see some more from this author.
I didn't expect this ending, but it made the story even more exceptional.
Good flow to the plot. I agree that less history was better. The focus was on this woman.
Nicely done.
soaked through and more half wishing i was her from beginning till end.
Holy shit i did not see that coming. Great story and an awesome twist! Hope to read more from you.
In many of the famous kidnappings, the defence has been that the abduction was staged for publicity purposes. How true is that? Kidnapped suggests there may be a kernel of truth in some of these defences.
Up is down in the surprise ending in Kidnapped! There are hints that the kidnapping is staged right up to the end but the hints are skillfully concealed. Well done!