All Comments on 'Kidnapped'

It is a mix between rape and stockholm effect. Should have been in nonconsent or, at the very least, had some warnings at the top of the story. One star.

Not too bad, but desperately needs an Editor

Great story idea, good character development but, as said above, you really need a proofreader/editor.

Is there going to be more to this story? It's ripe for future chapters as Alex's secret must come out, both from Alex's father's and Leanne's perspectives.

Some grammar issues but overall a part 2.

Pregnant, married 1 direction.

Dad finds out who she is another direction.

Thanks

I've never penetrated a virgin (never will either, just following the odds) but I will always enjoy any description of a deflowering. TY.

Wonder if this is Stockholm syndrome or a budding loving relationship. I strongly believe it is a budding relationship

Mediocre story and more grammar errors than I can count.

the trouble with this story is that in real life some socially inept characters will turn it into an ugly reality that will lead to murder when the kidnapper finds out that his victim is not at all grateful and hates his guts.

I liked the story. I really hope for a part II!

Oh God, this is so hot. love this