All Comments on 'Kidnapped Ch. 01'

"I'm blunt in my rejection of his fetishizing, but he's oblivious. It gets to me, deep, more than it usually does because I'm already feeling uncertain about where my mind is sitting. This is part of that chip that nestles on my shoulder."

I mean wow. I hope you're a professional author because this sentence alone was more well written than hundreds of stories I've read on this site.