by sarpedom
please continue this story. not too many good stories to read. but hey this is a great story, needs to keep going !!
Anxious for the final training and sale of doll and the rest. Follow each character for a bit, but focus on doll.
I have enjoyed read your story and find it very entertaining, but where are the missing Chapters (Ch 12, 13, & 14). What ruins a good story is missing pages of the story, especially if the missing pages are in the middle.
Really good story. So far.
I am really hoping that you will continue; for now the focus remaining on Kristin (Doll). Then, perhaps, you could write about the other girls with her as well as what happens to her best friend after they are separated.
Of course, my preference would be that everyone either escapes or finds someone to love that loves them just as much (whether remaining as slaves or not).
I just found your series and had to read all of it! Thank you for writing this and sharing Kirsten's training. I would really enjoy reading more of her story!