by partwolf
I’m disappointed in the direction this story has taken. I was hoping for a good murder mystery but what I’m seeing is a Dom-Sub love story revolving around some truly disturbing murders. I’m apprehensive about reading any more of this .
I agree with Freddog6601. Feels like it's become really tangential to the way the story started. Turning into some weird BDSM fantasy with no real progress towards a conclusion in sight. Not a BDSM fan by any means but have been trying to hang on for the sake of a good Minnesota writer. I need an idea how long this story is going to be in order to decide if I can hang in there.
I've always liked your stories, but wonder how long I'll read this one if it doesn't go more in the direction of what initially appeared to be the main theme.
I'm a long-time practitioner of BDSM and also enjoy good murder mysteries, so this is right in my enjoyment wheelhouse. Nicely done. 5*