by Ebolaone
"Okay, here's where we fast forward. For details, read Part 1."
It's an unatonable cardinal sin to write this in the text of the story. It seriously is. Don't do it. Please don't. For fucks sake, just give an author's note.
Don't assume the readers to be dense in the head like Ted. Don't summarise the entire first chapter in the second. Just give a author's note making the reference and start with something new right away.
The good work of first chapter is spectacularly destroyed in this one. Better luck next time. No stars.
AWESOME chapter Two
Loved part 2 and ready for part 3
Nice to read the players are not teens and skinny with jumbo studs.
Go for more
I liked your stories but wonder if there is going to be more? Do they develop a relationship, do they continue fucking? Does their mom and step-father get involved? All kinds of questions you could answer.
A really good storie I am really wet must take care of myself. Hope to read more, sex was just great.
5 stars. Some of it based on you writing a good story even though it was kinda short. The rest cause of the commenter (cant even have a user name gotta go under anonymous) who cried about u recapping chapter one n not putting it in as an authors note(cardinal sin)🤣🤣🤣🤣☺🤣 keep up the great writing n write however u wana write it
Wow, Hot, Hard & Fast. Sure hope there more to cum. Five burning up stars.
One of the best.
I have no incestuous thoughts at all towards my family but I find it such a wonderful subject.
I masturbate to these even at 69 y.o. some days doing it 3 or 4 times a day along with porn vids.
I sadly do not have a cum shot due to a TURP procedure (look it up) I had to have but I do experience the tremors for want of a better word.
I cannot wait for more stories in this series as Mom seems as carefree as these 2.
Good work