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"A few months ago, someone suggested that we add the pentacle to our symbols since the novel, "The DaVinci Code" provides a detailed narrative on Venus and indicates the pentacle is Her symbol. We may add one of her pentacles since most of us like the pentacle better and, as the book indicates, it is closely related to the natural order."
"The 'natural order'? I don't understand, Mistress."
"I have studied this in detail, pet, so I feel I can speak to it honestly. In early civilization, the female was revered and held in high esteem by humankind. The female goddess reigned supreme. After all, man came from the womb of the female. A male was not considered to be 'with god' unless he had communed, sexually, with a woman. Sex was a religious rite. Along the way, the male subjugated the female, made her a second-class citizen and made sex a sin. While "The DaVinci Code" is fiction, Dale Brown brings a lot of this history to light in his novel. It is interesting reading from that aspect.
"Is the Venus Coterie the other deep dark secret to which you alluded, Mistress?"
"Oh my, no, pet, it isn't. In fact, it's not even close." Then changing the subject, she added, "I think we had better move to the dining room."
Two glasses of wine were waiting for us when we returned to our table. My seat was to Kelly's right, not across the table as one might have expected. Kelly lifted her glass and said, "A toast to us, my darling pet?" I touched the rim of my glass to hers. "To the Fates that brought us together; may they live long lives." Without consulting, we intertwined our arms so that we were "connected" while sipping. As we stared into one another's eyes and sipped our wine, the most wonderful feeling I have ever had surged through my body.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous10 months agoPhrasing matters: there’s no male species or female species. There is Homo sapiens as a species with male and female genders. Suggesting that a male is a separate species reveals more about you and your worldview than any science. Unless it’s a Freudian slip which changes nothing.
Pixiehoffalmost 5 years agoYou keep up the standard amazingly well, and even for those, like, me, who often find details of the "lifestyle" boring, in your hards they aren't.
JanetMonabout 5 years agoAuthorThank you, CogitationBlink, for your comments. I agree with you on the issue of the butt plug. I should have "had Kelly remove it."
Regarding the removal of the stockings I couldn't find a problem. In Ch 15, the wording is: Sam opened a desk drawer, picked up a key, and removed the padlocks on my shoes, then removed the shoes, but not the garter belt and nylons. The word "not" is very important. They were later removed in chapter 16 as you mentioned.
CogitationBlinkabout 5 years agoI’m really enjoying this series. It’s a good mixture of character development and sex which many stories here lack. I understand you’re rewriting/editing the story from ten years ago but I think you need to pay some attention to continuity errors. In part seventeen Kelly inserted a two inch butt plug before they went to the salon. At the end of part eighteen they’ve been to the salon, an eyeglass store, a department store, back home, and now to Lisa’s for dinner. Is Kimmy still wearing that plug? Given that she internally questions everything I would imagine that object might be of concern to her by now if not sooner.
It feels a bit like Chekhov’s gun. “If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired. Otherwise don’t put it there.”
As another example during the initiation Kimmy’s ankle cuffs were removed along with her stockings and garter belt before her flogging. Later her stockings and garter belt were removed again when she put on the white shift. Minor things perhaps, but they can interrupt the flow of the story.
Again, I’m enjoying the story and looking forward to the next chapters but these were things I noticed. Overall it is very well done.
