All Comments on 'Kim's New Life Ch. 24'

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erktecerktecabout 5 years ago
Tooo Short

Loved the writing , as usual, but the chapter was was too short. Barely enough to get warmed up with.

NewnotsureNewnotsureabout 5 years ago
Jousting and then stop

Yes this is too short I would like you finish a story line maybe take this one to the next morning because Kim needs to leave. I all most want Kim to tell her mistress she needs to go but this is not the story line

Slurpy29Slurpy29about 5 years ago
Ditto on the Length

When I started reading I was really looking forward to see how Kim was going to explain how she changed, then it just stopped. I enjoyed it, but it’s hard to give a rating since it ended so abrutely.

toy4LadyandDontoy4LadyandDonabout 5 years ago
Grrrr too short

Loved as usual

😸toy😸

Cindy1001Cindy1001about 5 years ago
Cliffhanger

Ditto on the length but that allows for a tremendous cliffhanger! Besides, I know you have the full story written out, so you probably don't want it to be over too soon. Make us addicted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
A Great Cliff Hanger

Yes the chapter was a little short, but I think you have created a great cliff hanger, as to what will happen next after the great reveal. There are so many different possibilities, I am looking forward to see which course it will take, It would have been almost an anticlimax if you had completed the night in one chapter. Please keep going as I am longing to see how it pans out. Rgds Al

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Involving Someone Else in Kink Without Consent

kimmy deciding to sleep with her friend on the basis of her Mistress' direction is involving the friend in Kelly and kimmy's kink without consent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
The anonymous comment of 5/23 is wrong

Barb is not involved in their kink. By telling Kim to seduce Barb, Kelly was pushing Kim to do something she knew Kim wanted to do, but wouldn't otherwise consider because of her love for her Mistress. Kim's subsequent seduction only involved Barb and not Kelly. Barb is a lesbian. She chose the lesbian club for their date, not Kim. Barb has a free mind and is very capable of saying "No" which she did not.

PixiehoffPixiehoffalmost 5 years ago
Hotting up again

This has been consistently excellent, and once more you raise your game. Superb!

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