by JanetMon
Loved the writing , as usual, but the chapter was was too short. Barely enough to get warmed up with.
Yes this is too short I would like you finish a story line maybe take this one to the next morning because Kim needs to leave. I all most want Kim to tell her mistress she needs to go but this is not the story line
When I started reading I was really looking forward to see how Kim was going to explain how she changed, then it just stopped. I enjoyed it, but it’s hard to give a rating since it ended so abrutely.
Ditto on the length but that allows for a tremendous cliffhanger! Besides, I know you have the full story written out, so you probably don't want it to be over too soon. Make us addicted.
Yes the chapter was a little short, but I think you have created a great cliff hanger, as to what will happen next after the great reveal. There are so many different possibilities, I am looking forward to see which course it will take, It would have been almost an anticlimax if you had completed the night in one chapter. Please keep going as I am longing to see how it pans out. Rgds Al
kimmy deciding to sleep with her friend on the basis of her Mistress' direction is involving the friend in Kelly and kimmy's kink without consent.
Barb is not involved in their kink. By telling Kim to seduce Barb, Kelly was pushing Kim to do something she knew Kim wanted to do, but wouldn't otherwise consider because of her love for her Mistress. Kim's subsequent seduction only involved Barb and not Kelly. Barb is a lesbian. She chose the lesbian club for their date, not Kim. Barb has a free mind and is very capable of saying "No" which she did not.
This has been consistently excellent, and once more you raise your game. Superb!