All Comments on 'Kink Neighborhood Ch. 01'

Hopefully the series continues!

Do you actually read what you write? You take a perfectly good story and ruin it with endless repetitions of the characters names. At least twice and up to six repetitions of the same name in a single paragraph. READ what you write and see how annoying that sort of thing is.

Try writing she rather than Brenda or he rather than Michael all of the time.

I actually stopped reading it because it just grated on my senses.

Another clichè of a story.