All Comments on 'Kink Party'

It's clear you know a lot about kink. Good to see healthy kink.

This was fantastic. Definitely your best work yet. Loving the relationship (and dialogue) between Scarlet and Astrid. There's something very kinky and erotic about the Femme Domme/sub butch dynamic. Nice to see it played out so well here. A shining example.

Would be very keen on revisiting these two again, though not sure where you would want to take things from here. Perhaps the next stage would be for one of Astrid's previous subs to watch her submit to Scarlet (in private). Based on her reactions to the public display towards the end, that seems like something that Astrid might really enjoy (discreetly, of course).

Anyway, great piece of writing. A full five-star effort.

Amazingly hot...

Incredible! I would love to be dominated in a public setting like this!

Another amazing story! I know nothing of this world but you certainly make it realistic. Nice work!