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All Comments on 'Kinky Date Gone Wrong'

by sunshine_1997

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starbanestarbaneabout 4 years ago
Nice

Waiting for the next chapter!

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 4 years ago
Needs Work

But lots of promise in this story for more.

justwarped2018justwarped2018about 4 years ago

great start love to read a lot more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sequel Needed

Anna, Carol and Robert need to become a threesome.

EIoPolizeiEIoPolizeiabout 4 years ago

Let the three have some family bonding.

csltcsltalmost 4 years ago
Thanks for the treat!

Fun Story, doors opened...

Lars420Lars420almost 4 years ago
Don't stop now!

Get Anna involved now !

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

PLEASE!, PLEASE!!, get an editor/proofreader!!!!!

The constant changing of tense, and the MANY spelling and grammatical errors make this unreadable.

Good story and story line.

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Just a beginner in story writing and doesn't have any rules or such. So I write according to my liking and don't know if it's everyone's cup of tea.