All Comments on 'Kinky Kiki'

...or.WERE, you really must learn the difference.

There is nothing like a well written story that is naughty and kinky. Nice work.

i thought it was a good story. Don't listen to those people who read porn, and look for spelling errors, that just ain't right.

Seaknight

I would have given your story a 100 if not for some glaring spelling errors. "High HEALS" and "PEALED down her thong" are just 2 that stand out like a bright neon light on a dark and moonless night. Handsome is a nice useful adjective when describing a man; however, "hansom" is not an adjective but a noun - meaning horse drawn carriage. I enjoy your stories but please proofread them, or have them proofread by someone with a command of the English language.

For 4 psycho-bubble.