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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great to find another chapter after so long. Wish you all the best with your endeavors. Hopefully you'll find success in publishing.

As the maps in the glossary chapter don't open anymore, I'm struggling to understand the lay of the land. The descriptions in this chapter are contrasting with what worldview I have in my head. The story is still enjoyable, just very puzzling.

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