All Comments on 'Kirrily's Risqué Roadtrip Ch. 01'

nice beginning bring mom into the fold

I love “riding on lap” stories, and this was a good one. The genre is completely implausible so the reader has to suspend disbelief and just…go along for the ride. Yours had a little extra realism with the mom seemingly onto what they were doing. Perhaps that can be explored further in another chapter? 5 * s

Loved your story. Please continue with added chapters