All Comments on 'Kiss-Cam'

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DevonCowboyDevonCowboyalmost 2 years ago

Really nicely told and paced perfectly to build up the final intensity. I hope there's more, even if it's just fir my hand's sake!

Timeless13579Timeless13579almost 2 years ago

Great build-up to their first time! And that night was so erotic! Hoping for more about their adventures!

Reggie2xxReggie2xxalmost 2 years ago

A great story written so good nicely telling both mens feelings and the pleasure of receiving and giving to each other. I hope there maybe a nice part two exploring more of each other.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This needs a sequel!

sensuousOkietopsensuousOkietopalmost 2 years ago

You had me right from the start. Nothing was hackneyed just an interesting premise that played out with real suspense. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very hot, sexy, well written, good build up, good climax. Loved the whole story and hope it will continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

damn that was hot!

remy247remy247almost 2 years ago

So hot. Please continue the story with more exploration.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I hope you continue this story!

mikeinatlmikeinatlalmost 2 years ago

Wow, that was HOT!!!! Very fun, interesting premise. The chemistry between the guys starts off great and by the end is off the charts. They clearly like each other and the sex only added to that. Please keep this story going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story was wonderful! I really loved it!

I hope there is more.5 stars!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved the story from the onset. Tony's sexy patch of chest hair is unbelievably sexy! And the way Tony and Chris "fall into" each other is just precious, This shows how two guys can just be in the right place t the right time! I hope they stay together, and that you develop their story further! They are two great guys who could grow into a real deep love and passion for each other. Love too whatnot started all with kiss! Great reading!

JasonIsHot4UJasonIsHot4Ualmost 2 years ago

Great story! Hot fantasy with just enough leadup

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

Five Stars burning hot!

furluvrcafurluvrcaalmost 2 years ago

Love it! I hope there’s more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very HOT. It's always exciting to discover new things about your sexual nature. The never-ending wonderful way our bodies tell us YES, this is where you should be. Hope this is just part 1 of this ***** story. MLF

lingerielover68lingerielover68almost 2 years ago

AMAZING!! An impulse to make light of an uncomfortable situation leading to such an amazing experience has me thinking about trying to make light of a few of mine, lol. Hope to see more of these two!!!

algolfcrazyalgolfcrazyalmost 2 years ago

Hot story.I need something like this to happen to me.Hope there is more to come of this story

CuriousPeteCuriousPeteover 1 year ago

Really good tale and very hot. A believable story and nice slow build. Loved it.

Calico75Calico758 months ago

This is the second time I have read this. Very well wriiten. Realistic and erotic!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Love this! Keep returning to it for a re-read. Would be so great to see a continuation where they go on to explore more of each and eventually fall in love. ❤

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